Sound needs work.
I have been guilty of this offense more than once myself but the voices were difficult to here and the music was too loud. The story could have used some work however you told us in your review that you focused more on graphics and music rather than story so I did not take off for that. I like the animation. It is truly top notch. The editing was well done. However there were some similarities to the new He-man that I despise. I am not really into people who use other animation styles in their work. However, besides that everything else was indeed front page material. I would love to see more of your work in the future.